jueves, 7 de julio de 2011

July 7th Journal

I really have had a fantastic experience at the baseball game, but a fantastically boring one.

The evening was good because the host seating beside me was very nice and I enjoyed talking to him. And I also like to have new experiences and I was eager to know how a baseball game is.

But the game is so boring. And, in my opinion, I was not the only one to feel the boredom:most of the people pay little attention to what was happening in the field. The most exiting situations took place when the ball reached the public.

In conclusion, I liked the experience but, definitely, I don't like baseball.

1 comentario:

  1. * Becareful with redundancy [repeating something too much--> Also, I like to have new experiences, SO I was eager to know ABOUT baseball games.

    *try not to start your sentences with "And"

    I'm glad you experienced baseball. :)

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